Incompletely Complete

[Written: 2024-09-08]

The moment I saw you I was complete;

All aspirations I had dissolved within that first week.

Everything I was became putty in your hands;

Whatever I would be would be yours to demand.

If I was a dream, I’d hang around the corners of your mind;

If I was late I’d be late on the watch of your time.

And if you asked me to chase all your monsters away;

I would fight them immediately with no delay.

If you needed the silence I’d have nothing to say;

And if you feel like I’m failing, I’d do so in the best way.

Because the moment I see you is that moment again today;

You redefine success for me and whatever the cost I’ll pay.

As I have seen angels art for you in a heaven stay;

And whenever you call I will run to you if I may.

6 responses to “Incompletely Complete”

  1. MelliAnne avatar
    MelliAnne

    Very sweet. Anyone would think you were in love !!!!

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    1. Adam (Tanster1080) avatar

      You know I have to Chase the monsters away for the ones I love :p

      1. MelliAnne avatar
        MelliAnne

        Haha. Monster bashing

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  2. yassy avatar

    A beauty of a write. A total gem. Emotions eloquently expressed with so much elegance and style.

    This one just pulled at my heart strings.

    1. Adam (Tanster1080) avatar

      Thank you Yassy, that means a great deal coming from a talented writer as yourself 🙂

      1. yassy avatar

        Welcome , Adam.

        You are very gifted too .. very very talented..

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