Without You

Without You

[Written: 2024-11-13]

When you are gone my world is

like the solar system without a star; our Sun.

Crashing through space with no centre to revolve around;

I am scared of what I will become.

The other planets lost in the abyss of space,

like friends lost; and friends past;

they are gone from this place.

There is no other that could replace you,

not even in the entire human race;

I loved you before; I love you forever;

I love you now and from beyond the grave.

5 responses to “Without You”

  1. yassy avatar

    what a beautiful poem. Simple and elegantly eloquent.. a love so deep and true. A lyrical gem of a verse.

    1. Adam (Tanster1080) avatar

      Thank you, Yassy. Your comments guide me on 🙂

      1. yassy avatar

        You are very welcome, Adam. Your poem is like a beacon from a lighthouse that can be sighted on stormy seas .. a guiding light that inspires poetic energy.

        1. Adam (Tanster1080) avatar

          That might be my favourite comment ever! Thank you 🙂

          1. yassy avatar

            🙂

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